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DRINK is a Visual Novel revolving around Louise Hisogaki and an unfortunate MC, Kazuma Yamamoto, who was 'invited' to a test-tasting session. Kazuma was trapped and locked in Louise's residence right after he arrived. All he needs to do is obey and trust his guts to save his life. Would Kazuma be freed from the 'prison'? 

GAME TAG: Psychological horror (Mild), R18 (Mild), R18G (Severe), Visual Novel, Indie game.

P/S: The auto button doesn't work. 

P/S/S: Here is the download. The one provided in there is only a note saying "thanks" if you ever donate.
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/18aN7HIK4FtnWVYZ9C6sSHsjm08a2hEBH/view?usp=drive...
(More download versions will appear soon)

CREDITS:
Game UI/interface : Meloncube ( Twitter: @VysAries )
Music: Ximares ( XIMARES ) , Kazami Shintaro ( Dex Hexallion )
Art, story: VirusZeke ( @VirusZeke )
Programming: Soulord
Proofreader: Roy R. Salipuran, Kleio O'Mann

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DONATION PURPOSE:
IF the donation is going well, another game called RE-BITE (major interactive VN), which is a BIGGER game for the continuation of DRINK. 
It will have:

> Pick and build mechanism. Able to scavenge area and build an item needed for elimination.
> FULLY VOICE ACTED. JP AND ENGLISH.
> Meter-based ending (CHARACTERS). Pick choices and try to control the meter in the right area to get the desired ending.
> Getting to know the corrupted tycoons and getting to know them personally.
> OPENING and ENDING REMAKE. It has been done. But it deserves better ;)
> Map travel. Goes around in places and build relationships with the characters you love. (similar system to Danganronpa)
> Status, outfit changes, styles, and many more. You will get different commentary and reactions with different outcomes. It will affect the meter as well.
> More new characters! more people to simp upon /oi
> New characters will help you in building your stats
> Moving BG. Yes. Animated BG.
> Long-lasting game you can play for months. Take your time to invest!

StatusReleased
Rating
Rated 4.0 out of 5 stars
(1 total ratings)
AuthorVirusZeke
GenreVisual Novel
TagsHorror, indiegame, Psychological Horror, viruszeke

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The story seems okay for a book rather than a visual novel. There's not much suspense at the beginning, a lot of disconnect between the player and the main character due to the 3rd person use, and at the same time, the motive feels rushy. Ideally, the story should be approached from the point of view of someone developing the first contact with the characters and the environment, thus creating a fresh experience for the player.

Regardless of the issues mentioned above, I can see a bit of the potential, especially if the game becomes slightly more of a puzzle that needs to be solved to let the player escape. Perhaps, a murder mystery could be involved if just a few more characters get added.

This is a very helpful review! Thank you very much. I can agree to your points. This is my very first time creating a VN so it is a whole new experience for me to get the game moving. Although, i can't quiet grasp the ideal. Would it be okay if we talk more in private? I can tell you about everything I've planned of. 

I'm not a big expert in visual novels but I could give you more feedback on certain parts of your work in the future.
Feel free to ask Pan Diman#1337